damn
the shit was hoti mean the lyricism was incredible yun on da beat ridiculous lovin it
keep it goin
Author Comments
yuns take a number beat and this is just a real good story i made up this is for my new mixtape get at me for collabs
mseemercury responds:
thx bro
cool
i mean your shits pretty cool...but like not amazing; you shouldnt hate on brothas like vinny b cuz he doesnt have as much talent as you....
your best song tho
mseemercury responds:
hmmm pls show me where i hated thx
great
sounds like rap from the prime days of rap
beats incredible, lyrics, are great with progressive story-telling
sometimes you let the easiest rhymes choose you it seems rather than spending a little longer to get the perfect choice, but overall it was really very impressive, particularly at this site where rapping talent is practically nonexistent
Story rap
is the bomb, lol. Good job on this. I could picture what you were saying while you were rapping. The beat and the story reminds me of an old school cop drama or something. Good job.
5/5 - 3.81 / 5.00 (+ 0.087)
Damn man, its like a twist
one of them odd twillight zone shit, sounds like a book a write man, very strong ending man. really lot of power in your voice! with every track man you blow my mind.
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4.85 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- Apr 23, 2008
- 9:09 PM EDT
- Genre
- Hip Hop - Modern
- File Info
- Song
- 4.7 MB
- 2 min 5 sec
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