[ f ] Shattered Hopes

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[ f ] Shattered Hopes

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Tell me what you think of it. Thanks.
Verse 1- 0:11
Chorus 1- 0:56
Verse 2- 1:18
Chorus 2- 2:03

In my opinion it gets good at the chorus so if you get bored, fast forwards to it, thanks again.

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DzGuy

2008-06-10 16:42:16

pretty good

Nice melody. The beginning was a little slow but when everything started building up it sounded great! Might want to make the percussion instruments stand out a little more but other than that I really like it.

9/10
5/5

-DzGuy

flashmac responds:

Thanks a lot dude. You made some good points. But I made this a long time ago so I think I've improved since then.

Two-Shekel

2008-04-21 19:52:20

great

melodically its ur best piece ever

but sometimes the synths get a little too heavy for it to be a great piece
to rap on

still tho, orchestrally awesome

mabye keep it simpler sometimes, but i love it.

uve totally come up
ur getting a shitload better each track
keep it up and ur gonna be a regular front pager

-shek

flashmac responds:

Thanks for the review. Yeah I also think this is one of my best tracks melody wise. But when I made this track, I didn't make it for lyrics. That's why you got the heavy synths. Glad you like it anyway.

P-Balla

2008-04-21 08:30:38

yeayea i like this one man

good work the melody is real nice, has a good catchy sound to it man.

good variety and use of instruments too.

it was good that the drums wer kept simple, perfect for someone to spit somethn on.

keep up the good work man!~

-Pop Rock of DDE

flashmac responds:

Thanks man. Glad you liked it. =D

OBIEakaAO

2008-04-20 23:09:08

very nice

great flow, great ideas, sounded very shady/g-unit style. loved it, didnt get bored at all, this is the kind of stuff i like, real smooth hip-hop. nice work.
10d 5d

flashmac responds:

Thanks man. Oh, by the way, have you found a track you want to collab on yet?

CrUiZ3R

2008-04-20 22:34:29

O.o

this is sooooo slow but it makes it for a very good song!!! its teh slowness that makes this awesome....5/5 10/10 (ty for teh review on my song^^)

flashmac responds:

This is slow to you? lol, this is normal speed for me. It must be because you do trance and stuff. That's a big difference in tempos, haha. Thanks for the review.