Not a fan of darkcore, but this is pretty good. Nice melody. the only thing is...
it sounds like there is a giant talking/dying blue whale with legs devouring the powdered skulls of a thousand innocent newborn babies through a straw made of the pubic hairs of TEN THOUSAND down-syndrome "ridden" (if you will) giraffes. After this was complete, the talking/dying blue whale exploded into a fine mist of blood and gore, completely covering the walls of the HUGE septic tank it was in and entirely engulfing the small six year old boy that stood not three feet away. The boy, who was later rescued by the monstrous Pustel creatures from Gaz-Modan (Planet X13E) galaxy, was taken into the rusty old van, which had a sign on it that said "Free Candy Inside", that was parked in the back of Oprah Winfrey's ass, cut himself like an emo untill he bled to death and his corpse rotted and burned in the fire pits of hell while his corpse was getting skull-f**ked by maggots.
ANYWAY! Thats beside the point. I enjoyed this one. Great Melody and rhythm to it. Overall, great work. 5/5 10/10!!!!111oneoneoneone
P.S. - I was bullshitting ( DUH ) and I don't have too big of a problem with the vocals. Also, check out some of my music!
Thanks, I think :P