Yo yo yo
Heh I have just discovered I have few of your melodies on my mp3. That s nice man keep me updated on new trances of yours. They have soul.
This is my own Obsession Of Force, but I changed a lot in it.
Things you should do, or at least try to:
-Enjoy it
-Give a FAIR vote
-Write a review with constructive criticism
-Don't be a jackass (and zero it without even listening)
Things from wich I'd really appreciate it if you would do them:
-Vote 5 (and maybe more than once)
-download it
-Add me and this song to your favorites.
Yo yo yo
Heh I have just discovered I have few of your melodies on my mp3. That s nice man keep me updated on new trances of yours. They have soul.
Thank you. I'll try to think of it :p
Not perfect but close enough for a 10
I thought this was definitely a very good song. It was pretty but there were definitely problems. It was not nearly as polished or professional as someone like kr1z or DJ-Nate or someone like that (I could make a list) but it was above what I would expect from what I think is your 7th song (not totally sure which). One thing that I thought needed improvement was the integration and use of the voice thing. Putting speech into songs is definitely difficult so it is only to be expected. At times around the middle and just after, some of the tunes and background tunes seemed to conflict. It was too repetitive sometimes but changed up throughout the song. The thing is, when you changed it, you sort of did the same thing for some time then changed then did that for some time. I think it should have changed more rather than changing but then repeating too much. The stuff after the "come on" part was a little too chaotic and some of the sounds should have been changed. Other than that, it was very good. I might seem a little critical but you should see the sort of reviews I have on crappy songs. Then again, I usually don't review those. I did enjoy this song and it was great. I didn't just rate it highly for the whole 5 team thing, I rated it highly because it was good. 5/5 9.4-5/10. I thought it was somewhere between 9 and 10 so I just bumped it up for the effort. =P (long review)
Thanks for all the constructive criticism! Glad you liked it too. I don't think I'm going to change anything now, I'm almost working for a month on my new one now ('Frozen Mind')
And yeah, Kr1z and dj-nate are amazing. (Kr1z taught me a lot btw)
Wow
this one's even better than the first version! You're good man! Sounds really professional and could be played in the disco!
Thanks !
But I don't think it sounds professional at all, It is my best song yet, but it won't fit in the disco...I guess.
Soon my next one ('Frozen Mind') will be finished. (But I'll only post a demo version on NG)
Thanks for the awesome score!
Nicely done on effects, but little flaw there. :)
I like how the beat goes, with all the pads and other effects running on the background. Filled with pace and energy, I listened till the end of the song patiently. I like it, but I have a suggestion--from 2:10 onward, the saws (I'm not sure this is what you call it) are quite loud, and they start to attack each other's melody--destructive, not constructive, in simple words. The rest sounds better than the first one, mainly on the gate effects and other details you've put in.
Thanks for constructive criticism :p
Maybe I should have mastered a little better near the end :D
The new version is mostly to replace the weak end of the first version :p
Thanks for the 9!
(also stay in touch, I'm working on a new dance/trance track (haven't really figured it out what it's going to be)
congrats
this is actully quite good it needs improvment but im not sure what leave this with me and ill try find whats wrong good try though im adding to the best ever
Thanks!
I don't know to much to say in this response :p
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