I liked it, but I did notice that in some parts, particularly towards the end of the song that it got very quiet and I had a hard time hearing anything. Other than that it was pretty good.
~Imagine you're listening to this while you're at a website, so i think it should get softer and whatnot.
First off, good job on the sounds in this. I really liked all of them, especially the background synth playing the melody the whole time. I also really liked the way the percussion sounded...not quite typical, but not really out there. And the miscellaneous noises you used were pretty sweet too (breathy synth was awesome), whether they were adding to the ambience or the beat, and they were nicely spaced out.
I think the percussion may have gotten a bit repetitive, but it really wasn't too bad because you kept it parsed nicely with some buildup and the additions at times. Also, I would have liked to hear maybe a bit more ambience in there, because after only a few listens it felt like I had heard everything, and that's not really a great sign.
The dynamics are interesting...it gets quiet towards as it goes along, but then sorta ends quite abruptly, and I don't really think I liked that. I think some cadence would have really helped with the ending, because as is I was really left hanging.
Anyways, good job on this, it's certainly an enjoyable, interesting listen. Keep it up.
And if you get the time, could you check out my newest submission, "Warrant"? I'd really appreciate it, thanks.
i checked out your song.
you need to check out the original version to see why it end abruptly.
good but you might want to delete the orignal
i like nostalgia!