Stay_forever (2ndTry)

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Hey Boys& Girls....

" For the people who haven`t heard the 1st one i Submitted before...just keep this track
in mind " -

For my Good Friend DJ_derrick ... i dicided to remake my own "Forever" track.
With Hope this one will be Better then the first... i also tried asked some other friends to listen to it before remaking the track...
Now i made a Trance track with snares Influeces, wich i personally like because it gives the track
a more improvised sound to it.

I hope you enjoy it...

Greetz DJMontana


i see it improved.

This is much better.

I'm kinda sick, so i hope you won't be upset if i leave a short review...

The vocals still sounded kinda off key, but it wasn't enough for me to not like the song. NIce snares.

Ooooo. at 2:43 was amazing, but then the vocals got off key. there are two ways to change this small problem: change the key of the vocals, or change the chord progress you are using to go with the vocals. I would personally go with the second since it's the easier one and won't mess with the original sound. Just when she does that one thing that goes up, put a higher chord in it. Ohhh. now i hear it. she puts in an accidental. lol. if you dno't know enough about music, she goes out of key. that's why. you ahve to put in a new chord there. then it will be on my favs list.

but, for now, it gets


you don't have to redo this, but there's my suggestion.

DJ Derrick

DjMontana responds:

Hey DJDerrick...

Hey man.. yeah thnx for the high rating !
But the Vocal chores is good, but she sings abit high, then Low..
It sounds ok, but when the music and The vocal come together it gets abit off.
But for the record thnx for commenting on me, even when ur sick... :D
Thnx ;-)
I`ll try to get it better from now on...

Keep Voting :-)

Greetz DJMontana

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2.64 / 5.00

Apr 1, 2008
2:11 PM EDT
File Info
4.6 MB
4 min 59 sec

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