i see it improved.

This is much better.

I'm kinda sick, so i hope you won't be upset if i leave a short review...

The vocals still sounded kinda off key, but it wasn't enough for me to not like the song. NIce snares.

Ooooo. at 2:43 was amazing, but then the vocals got off key. there are two ways to change this small problem: change the key of the vocals, or change the chord progress you are using to go with the vocals. I would personally go with the second since it's the easier one and won't mess with the original sound. Just when she does that one thing that goes up, put a higher chord in it. Ohhh. now i hear it. she puts in an accidental. lol. if you dno't know enough about music, she goes out of key. that's why. you ahve to put in a new chord there. then it will be on my favs list.

but, for now, it gets

5/5
10/10

you don't have to redo this, but there's my suggestion.

DJ Derrick