Great Start
Either the intro is too long, or it needs more build up. If your intro is almost the entire song, then its too long. But it still needs a little more poured in.
Good Luck
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EDIT: While your comments and reviews are still appreciated I actually have lost the FL file to this.
I'm trying to improve my sound and I'll delete this one after a while as I progress to finish it. I was hoping that people would be nice enough to review and help me through the process.
Things I would like to know - (I use FLStudios)
Does it sound good so far?
Should there be more build up?
Should I use different instruments and synths?
Do I need more FX or random sounds?
Is my intro too long?
Are my transitions smooth?
Any other suggestions.
I'm always trying to improve my sound and am willing to hear what people have to say. Thank you for suggestions and reviews they are greatly appreciated.
Mrmilkcarton responds:
Not finishing this one, search the Author Bjra for a new look on the melody. This song is scrapped.
Awesome!!
Artists like you are one of the reasons I train harder everyday...Even though I may never be as good as you, among others, it never hurts to try.
Anyways, 10/10, 5/5, favorited and downloaded. Not much more I can do, since your already on my favorite artists list. >_>
Maybe I should make Fulp put this song all over the ng? =D
Mrmilkcarton responds:
Why get fulp to listen to a song that isn't complete.
dude
you are good at what you do make song loger make it bit faster and add 1 to 2 more layers and you will be a goddly song
Mrmilkcarton responds:
Do an Author search for Bjra and you will the melody redone in our little "Vs" song.
awsome
this is just awesome the only problem is that this song should be 10 minutes long not only one .
Mrmilkcarton responds:
Demo of a song I won't finish :P.
Hmm...
Yes you do need more build-up. Do not do random sounds unless you're absolutely sure you can pull them together. Maybe make it a little more smooth at the 1:04 mark, this may seem odd at first but trust me you'll have more to build on.
Mrmilkcarton responds:
I've been doing alot of revamping to the build ups. the second build up has changed a fair amount to the one thats up here now. Thanks for the review.
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