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The melody sure is very nice and I kinda like the idea of the song.
Also the flow of the song is quite relaxing, heh.
As Gronmon already said in his review, the cymbal sounds pretty ugly. You should experiment with some other sounds there (maybe a Hi-hat would do the trick there).
My main problem with this song is, that it's missing the "big bang". It all sounds pretty nice but that's about it. Somehow there's nothing to this song that makes me wanna listen to it again. Maybe if it was played with real instruments this wouldn't be the case, so don't let that last statement discourage you ;) .
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