I'll post my review here.
Intro: needs ambiance and pads, maybe shorten it. feels drawn out a bit. I like the piano, feels housey
No real buildup, so I would probably work on that
Kinda wish the drops had more variation, just feels like the same idea laid out previously but with more drums.
Overall I would work on having more movement/change over time. I feel like the idea with the piano arps in the 3rd drop could have been in the first, with the other two variating on the previous ideas in a more sonically interesting way.
Outro: like the intro would benefit from atmos or ambiance of some sort so it's not just raw piano.
Mixing: overall I feel like it was undercompressed. Feels like it wasn't really EQ'd but not a lot of instruments were covered up by each other to begin with so it's alr. The exception was the arps in drop 3. Gain staging was kinda off, with the drums being a bit too loud comparatively.

Overall has solid potential, keep at it.