yoo dude
You make good music, and because I like some hard techno I like to review this one :P I don't make this hard songs myself, but this is what I miss
Nice Melody, I know the original from Scooter
-Intro
It's a nice melody, but you don't really build up, what if you made the melody more simple, and then the full melody in the main part of the song, also, the kick is too early
-Main
I miss hi-hat/claps only kick wouldnt do it. There's only one melody, add a bass and some extra sounds.
-Outro
Your outro is exactly the same as your intro, that's not the way it goes right? Try to make something what makes you think of scooter :P
Well, you want to edit something on the song now?