WHY DID YOU HAVE TO RAPE THE FIRST 10 SECONDS? DAMN don't you have any common sence? Lol. Apart from the first 10 seconds, there's the part from 1:16 which has a very annoying bleep, and it's too repetitive, and way too long.
I didn't say it sucks though, but you need to work on this, ALLOT. Just get out the stupid bleed at 1:16 and 3:16 and replace it with...something less overwhelming. and replace the first 10 seconds with 5 seconds of snaredrum or something.
7/10-4/5 because it has very catchy tunes and nice beats.