Really beautiful. I don't know much about music so I can't give very useful feedback, but for what it's worth the execution here is really good. Just wish there was some more progression/more melodies throughout the song.
I wish self cooling pillows were a real thing
I've learned a lot more music theory now than before but I would love to learn and improve from what I have now so any feedback of how I can improve is really appreciated
Also I think this isn't even that good compared to some of my other songs but this gets front paged
Really beautiful. I don't know much about music so I can't give very useful feedback, but for what it's worth the execution here is really good. Just wish there was some more progression/more melodies throughout the song.
Yeah I agree it was a little bit rushed, I will try to improve upon that in the future.
Thanks for your feedback btw!
This is very nice, although it would be a lot better if you put some more effort into making the piano more dynamic: right now it feels like a person is constantly hitting the piano very hard, which also makes it resonate a bit too much. You can see it very clearly in the audio itself: whenever the piano is gone, the db drops significantly
It's definitely somewhat repetitive as well, could use some variation
I like the strings though.
Thanks for the feedback, I will definitely try that in the future
The piano is very nice here and you play it so well so nice work indeed, so it was a pleasure rummaging thrugh the portal to find this compelling piece keep up the great piano
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nice changes, the melody is very lyrical and floats nicely! I would heavily recommend considering arpeggiation earlier in the piece. I really like this as a waltz, but it could use some more rhythmical color in the pianos left hand? that's up to you, just something to consider. good ideas, though!
Nice job! Pretty chill, but, a little bit repetative. Anyways, I've enjoyed it.
I really appreciate the feedback, will try to make the next piece less repetitive
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