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Cold Pillow

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I wish self cooling pillows were a real thing


I've learned a lot more music theory now than before but I would love to learn and improve from what I have now so any feedback of how I can improve is really appreciated


Also I think this isn't even that good compared to some of my other songs but this gets front paged

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Really beautiful. I don't know much about music so I can't give very useful feedback, but for what it's worth the execution here is really good. Just wish there was some more progression/more melodies throughout the song.

vietanh266 responds:

Yeah I agree it was a little bit rushed, I will try to improve upon that in the future.
Thanks for your feedback btw!

This is very nice, although it would be a lot better if you put some more effort into making the piano more dynamic: right now it feels like a person is constantly hitting the piano very hard, which also makes it resonate a bit too much. You can see it very clearly in the audio itself: whenever the piano is gone, the db drops significantly
It's definitely somewhat repetitive as well, could use some variation
I like the strings though.

vietanh266 responds:

Thanks for the feedback, I will definitely try that in the future

The piano is very nice here and you play it so well so nice work indeed, so it was a pleasure rummaging thrugh the portal to find this compelling piece keep up the great piano

~X~

nice changes, the melody is very lyrical and floats nicely! I would heavily recommend considering arpeggiation earlier in the piece. I really like this as a waltz, but it could use some more rhythmical color in the pianos left hand? that's up to you, just something to consider. good ideas, though!

Nice job! Pretty chill, but, a little bit repetative. Anyways, I've enjoyed it.

vietanh266 responds:

I really appreciate the feedback, will try to make the next piece less repetitive

Credits & Info

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Score
4.34 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 25, 2024
6:33 AM EDT
Genre
Classical
File Info
Song
4.2 MB
3 min 25 sec
Software
  • LMMS
  • LABS Soft Piano
  • BBC Symphony Orchestra

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