WOW!

The drums, chords, melody and arrangement are all done very well! At this point, I'm pretty sure what VSTs you used.. there really isn't much else to say! Everything is done very well! But then, why is this a 8.3/10..?

The bass is WAY too loud for me.. even at 8% volume, it hurts my ears and makes my desk vibrate. To prevent this from happening, I would strongly suggest the use of a spectrum analyzer like SPAN. Also, sidechain the kick to the bass. I can't hear the kick very well, so that would help. Just so none of your fans (in this case, me) have any issues in case they are listening on some special equipment. The 3d-printer on my desk is on one knee! Not to say anything mean though, I definitely understand how this would happen, as I used to not use any kind of spectrum analyzer, and only realized how much of a problem it was when I started using a subwoofer. Still, the bass pattern itself is very nice!

8.3/10!

P.S. How did you get your thumbnails???? I need to know!