To me, it's got this sweet vibe, but it hit me in the feels, ya know?
a friendship from a previous chapter of life
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I've been blessed
to take part
where the light outshines the dark
I've been blessed
from the start
even if we drift apart
but oh
the time has gone
so why, does it feel so wrong?
To me, it's got this sweet vibe, but it hit me in the feels, ya know?
Good
It's pretty good, I personally think that the song doesn't execute on the meaning completely effectively, and there are a few things you can improve, but other than that. It's good.
Make it longer
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