I like the furtive tone at the beginning and the cutesy synth plucks. The drums at :28 sound nice and crisp in the mix and help keep the energy level up. The texture sounds a bit thin at times - lot of instruments with little to no reverb or other mixing effects to make it sound richer, although maybe that's not an option in FL Studio Mobile, idk. I like the progression with the strings into 2:17 - that was a good climactic moment. The more energetic beat starting at 2:45 is a nice touch, but the harmonies there are a little dissonant between the pads and the cutesy lead synth. I like the outro with the strings and airy synth at 3:30, too. Solid work overall, CF24! Somehow I'm sure Waterflame heard it and liked it a lot. :)