your voice has a gritty tone to it, which works well with this beat. There is a poet nature to your flow; if that's your intention, I would suggest leaning harder in that direction by putting more emphasis on the ending syllables of each bar. If you're aiming for a more hip hop/rap delivery, I would suggest working on a more melodic approach. As mentioned in a previous review, the reverb on the vocals makes the audibility difficult to understand. Overall, good work here. Keep working at it!

Good job brother! Comes out natural, though the double ups are competing with the main vocals a bit too much. LETS GO!!!