It sounds too empty and distant. There's nothing filling the void between the soft drums and guitar. It just doesn't sound right, man.
Kinda reminds me of...
Okusenman, or Mega Man 2 (with lyrics). Well made, keep up the good work! :P
Lowfire3 has a point.
This does kind of feel a bit empty. The drums and electric guitar are fine, but there isn't a whole lot of substance to it. Still, the simple pleasure of listening to this theme is unparalleled. All in all, you could have done more, but what you've done here is done very well.
Great work, the guitar is strong and solid. The drums and well placed but it still sounds a lil empty. A bass would be a good start. Its a tender balance between being empty and over crowder. Just gotta find that balance. But still a strong piece.
Very empty sounding
Well, you were pretty good on getting the notes right, but its not very... well... complex. What i mean is that there are not that many instruments to make it special, so it ended up sounding dull. You could of at least added a bass guitar to it and it would of sounded a lot better.
PS: you are very good at playing the guitar =D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.