Its deffenatly a step up.

You're heading in the right direction when it comes to this beat. You may want to change up some of the sounds here and there but you got the beat down right. The guitars work a little better but you may still need to find some better sounds. You ARE heading in the right direction let me tell ya that hah. As for the fella below me let me just say this.. THIS SONG IS original.. You've not stolen this content. Its completely by you that makes it ORIGINAL. IT may not have the best sounds ever but we all start some where. Its easy for some to citique and trust me you'll get alot of that! LOL. Keep on it my friend

Wyldfyre1

nothing original

Nothing real original here, all you did was have guitar, than after 2 sets u added another guitar + some drums, than more guitar, was no like structure to the song just adding in more music every once in a while.