honestly not that bad for ur first finished track
i think the snare could have a more punch in the mix, and i think the instruments can be more varied too
what i mean is that there should be different instruments for the melody instead of just one yk (just suggesting! but i do think there shld be other instruments playing for the melody)
the ending could have just an impact, with the instruments it just sounds abrupt to me
the fact u made everything even the drums is still crazy to me XD
but it isnt that bad, honestly. i kinda like this :) i scout

7/10

edit: u dont need kontakt to make things like this, theres always free alternatives like labs and keyzone classic. :) still i understand