Hey Casper! :D

I'm digging it man! I know the very busy soundscapes aren't for everyone, but I don't think you'd be hard pressed for those that wouldn't want to get down to this!

Maaaaaaybe, what might be worth doing is playing around with is extending the beat and allowing different elements of the beat to weave in and out (maybe have some riffs/instruments that don't even trigger alongside the others. I say this as you have a lot to work with and it might give it an edge to be able to draw the beat out and let the individual components more time to shine.

Kaellin Ellis is a master of this, I'd highly recommend just watching some of his streams, even if it's just skimming through them for some insights. It also kinda fits in that wheel house which is why i suggest it.

Great shit man! Front page worthy stuff IMO :D

This is real nice! Love it!

I think the mixing could use a little help, there are deffinitely way too many instruments playing at once, It's like if you started with one thing and then added and added upon it because you weren't quite sure what to make of it, also I might be wrong but it doesn't have anything to do with the name you chose (which is just a nitpick but still), because neither is it a serenade or does it feel noiry. If you went into something more 12/8 or bluesy I could understand, but the state this is in doesn't really, like I said maybe you should try some of the stuff I listed.