The first couple notes reminded me of opeth's widowpane - that is, i think the chord progressions is neat! (here is the link if u r curious btw: https://youtu.be/bSpqLqC7U6g?si=KRZT0Jf5FMUhA9UY).

I'd higly recommend you to always use a 8-bit instrument as a pad for your song, just so you'll have an idea where the song is going to.

Also, don't forget to add reverb and a tad bit of chorus to the guitar otherwise it'll sound way too bland and it won't deliver half the atmosphere it can deliver when with it.

overall 4/5, but don't take this to your heart as an offense, lad. Take it as a colleague's advice. You'll find your music sounding way better - trust me.

xoxo, this has been meuny,