Cool riffs, keep up the good work.
I like it.
It sounds more like general rock. I would have put this over there.
Also, I agree with IDReaper; you're good at the instruments, you just need to work on your production skills, and all that really is is experimentation, so don't be afraid of compression, chorus, etc.
Also, I think palm mutes would sound better than those chinks, at least some of the time.
Sounds good to me.
Yes recording quality could be better as well as the distortion, but still this is an awesome display of skill and proficiency with guitar and bass. Your score should be higher :(.