Got kinda nervous when the waveform loaded and it was an entire wall of sound, though it's not as overwhelming as I expected. The hip-hop percussion at 1:40 is so dirty, I love it. Transitions between the different sections are fairly smooth.

I feel like this song paints a good picture of intense passion and the sense of restlessness you feel when you're not able to perform what you love most. I feel like everything pre-drop is that "Jayden waiting to get out of class" part of your story piece, while everything following the drop is the "rush to get home" so he could do some more drawing.

lol, i have no idea what the previous two reviewers are on, this shit's great! i really like the basses (especially the yoy) and the drums feel great on these headphones of mine

But dayum, this is loud XDD

AHH, that transition at 1:35 should have ended with that real sick ass Dnb drop where everything goes crazy (oh i think its called neuroDnb or something :D) the basses the leads the noises the DRUMZZZ.

2:00 hmm this might be just my view, but personally i dont like to start my drops with halftime and transitioning to doubletime....uff it feels like kinda suffocation of energy, just doesnt feel right....halftime for me feels like when youre driving on a highway full speed and just go into neutral....no gas no breaks no stress, you know. Thats why i like to start more flow-ey and then turn to neutral to slow down but still remain in the same energy.

i dont know if it makes sense, its just me comparing song energy management to car driving XD, you can ask me that on discord if youre interested XDDDD

Anyway 4 hours of work, too good....great job...too loud tho XD

Here's Day 3, let's see how the story continues you guys :flushed: (yes that was intentional).
if I had to point out one thing, or actually two things is that the drums DEFINITELY SHOULDN'T GO ABOVE ODCB (that usually worsens the quality of the sample), and a smaller issue, and really nitpicky one at that would be right before the song actually starts the sample cracks a bit I believe. If the drum issue were fixed, then it would've been easily 4 out of 5 stars, but man is that too annoying of an issue for me. I'm ranking all of the songs by how they got released and what I think while listening to them, I list out what I think could be improved on and why. This is Why I gave it such a low score, because once again I really do feel nauseous when listening to it. I hope you don't think about this one score too much, but please keep it in mind (although the problems I described might be because I'm autistic and really sensitive to certain noises because of that)

really good