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Really cool! Great, but...
Actually, your music, more than Heavy Metal, is more a mix of Electronic Rock, Electronic Pop and Techno genres (So I recommend that you put your music on General Rock or Miscellaneous), and I would recommend that you capture a little more of the "Pop" (so to speak) that the original music has (but you do capture it like 60%, but that's fine ;P) Otherwise it's excellent, and you applied the original rhythm for the electric guitar, and really, it turned out fantastic! :D
Otherwise, it does not need any further improvement 8)
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None, it's simply capturing a little more of the "Pop" that the original music has and that's it
4,5/5
//~SSJ4-Valentin15