perfect

I like the way the beginning is mellow and slow then you add the fast upbeat rhythm. Normally the two cant coexsist but it works here. Good job keep it up.

A bit rough on the transition

I like the mellow intro you have, but when the other instruments came in, it almost felt like I suddenly had another song playing simulatenously. I think it's probably because you are overlaying it on an offbeat, or simply that the two parts have distinct enough rhymthic feels to cause a sense of disparity. But after a while you kind of get used to it, and it stops bothering me so that I can enjoy the piece. And the piece is pretty nice overall.