It's a decent start. I like the little melody you have going here, and the instrument you chose to sing it. That said, that background strumming that I suppose is acting as a pseudo-percussion is a little off in my opinion. It's not terrible, but I don't feel like it adds a whole lot to the song.
Also, it really feels like the song ends abruptly in the middle of a statement, kind of like
Keep at it. I think you have some potential here.
Kavrak 
