It has a good rhythm and maintains it in the vocal mixes, and it is a positive point that I have for your music, although yes, I'm a little like SSJ4-Valentin15, which is one of the worst music I've ever heard, although your music is not Techno, it's more Breakcore or EDM,

The vowels are the only thing I liked about your music, but what I would like is for your music to be longer, and have more vowels and sound mixtures, but keep the vowels the same

And in conclusion, make your music longer, and have more mixes and rhythms, and not be monotonous, as SSJ4-Valentin15 said

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It's a little horrible,

I recommend that you make the sounds with a little more rhythm and that they are not repetitive, really, it is the worst Techno music I have heard in my entire life, and please improve the sounds and rhythms in the vocals, but otherwise there is room for improvement >:/

//~SSJ4-Valentin15