I'll go ahead and ignore the long silence at the end for the purpose of this review.
I think the mixing in this track is good, and the instruments are interesting and give it a lot of character. That said, I feel like there was a fair amount of discordance with the song that doesn't feel entirely intentional. It might be worth working on your harmonies for future tracks. Try more playful things that take you out of your comfort zone. If it sounds bad at first, that's alright, but keep playing with it.