i'm a fan now tbh, i really love the energy you're bringing to your tracks -- they're clearly full of passion!!

i love the beginning here, the hats are really nicely interspersed, the the transition at 0:33 is also awesome, and I love how each instrument kind shifts to match it. the beat coming back in afterward is dope too.

The coalescence that takes place in most of the middle of the track is cool, though a lot is happening, and the effect that each instrument has is lessened a little bit. it doesn't outstay its welcome though so i'm not reallly complaining.

the ramp-up that starts around 1:40 is a welcome and well-implemented change-up to the above section critique, i love how it drops into that piano note.

I thought it was ending at the quiet bit, and I was a little sad -- I was glad that there was more.

The drum at 2:47 sounds a little stock-y, maybe a minor sense of being out-of-place with the rest of the song. Overall, the outro does go on a bit longer than it probably ought to, though I liked the subtle beeping leftover.

This song was very cool, and I enjoyed it a lot! Lots of heart here, I'm glad I listened to it :)