Fine work. are you deeply into orchestral arrangement, aren't you? Regarding this, you're definitely better than mine. To reach the next level what could you do? This composition proves you can develop music which actually flows, far from the famous repeating fatigue. What can you do next imo is to bring that to interesting variations, in other words: to exaggerate it. Don't fear to create moments of apparent emptiness. Same goes for when it occurs to empower the density of music. Another great "boost" would be to work as an actual composer into a team for a film, well this is all we aim to do, right? Before that you can try to invest time in putting the music into a film you already know, seeing if it could fit it. Can be extremely regarding as a task, because you are forced to force your music in the direction of the film. So you can understand even better what's going on in that particular moment and which aspects of your music to increase.