Pretty cool song. Although it's not mastered and has some FX thrown in, it's pretty catchy.
I like your use of the phaser effect. It sounds great. The kick was perfect for this, it's not loud, as not to distract the listener from the pads and that lead.
Overall good song. Master this more and you got a pretty nice track on your hands.
Nice work. Keep it up!
Thanks for the great review:) I'll get to finishing this right after the week is through, I got exams, ugh. Lol I try to make a dark song but one rarely comes out haha.
Yah keep that kick heavy dude
Love the reverb hit clap stuff dude I love a good original submission. Really cool nice work on the gating.
Cool, thanks, I'll be sure to fix the distortion problem and tweak it up some more.
the kick is huge, but...
that's the reason there is very easily detectable distortion. the song is quite interesting though - yes. almost surreal in nature while not seeming to be a huge departure from the norm. it's definitely good, some of the elements are little too predictable - but that can work for some pieces and it doesn't act as the fatal flaw here. I'd put this at a 7 because some of the parts seem to have unintended bits of dissonance which becomes a little disruptive. a better look into theory, chord progression and harmony would probably ameliorate that.
all in all - the fault isn't one particular issue but more of a combination of small things that bring the overall score down for me.
Thank you for your review. I will try to improve on the points you have mentioned. Yeah, I made the kick using headphones, so that didn't work out to well. It's okay though, I've been working on it for a long time just for fun, and I will continue to do so.