I feel wishiwashi about this song. I really admire the dark synthetic symphonies littered within here, but I feel the accompanying lullaby-like harmonics just don’t give that strong melodic sound the justice it deserves. There are definitely some elements that are great with this song but I personally don’t think that dark synth and light synth go together (balance each other out) well. I apologize in advance if this may sound direct I don’t mean it to.

Hello there,nice job as always.

Pros: I’m in love with the synth, and that drum sounds great along with it, as well as this those choir like vocals 2:03 are a genuine wilidacious classic I suppose. Nice job. That bass from (I guess) a guitar is too freaking glorious, even for your standards.

Cons: The synth pad in the beginning sounds a bit off, and the other synths and drums don’t seem to go well with it, but that’s just me I suppose. This is still noteworthy art of a synthwave god.

I also make mistakes, just check my latest song Wildflowers and you’ll see what I mean lol.

This is a really beautiful song, I love how you worked inside the conventions of synthwave to create something moving and wistful. The last minute or so is just gorgeous. Great work!

neat sounding chord structure and cool breaks at :27 , :56 and at 2:17. everything flows well together.

oh hi good work