This was good

So this was a really good piece you have here the lyrics itself were pretty snazzy stuff and you presented them just right at the right moment even so that was a huge plus I think some added back end sound with some random sound f/x would be pretty cool just an idea though but other then that this was cool and some really nice lyrics made it even better so keep making unique works of sound

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added back end sound f/x

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thats rap

thats true, nice melody, lyrics
hott!!

Woo

Love it. A slow cachy melody, creepy, oldskool, rythmical. Great lyrics, great quality, great rythem. Everything flows on nicely, keep up the great work!

-cd-

Great and Underground

Hey, yeah I feel ya. Most hip hop tracks have bad lyrics and they vote bad scores because of bias and stereotypes, but yours' have amazing lyrics. beautiful.

Yeah I got the blammer bug now, all of my tracks are not getting the attention they deserve. This is hurting a lot of poeple's tracks as well.

But, anyway. I'm diggin' this beat, and the melody thats playing behind the vocals is repetitive but it works this way, very mellow and underground. nice one here.

great job,

im feeling this, the only thing i would say about the static, is to make it sound on purpose with out having to tell people is do what eminem did in the first 3 secs of "my dads gone crazy" . any ways i always enjoy your work keep it up. o and if any one on hear is voteing low because they hate hiphop, then get out of the hiphop portal.