Nice!

I can see some video game application in a track like this. It is a perfectly simple minor-sounding melody, but it does hearken to some kind of disturbing setting, and the atonal sound effects used throughout certainly complement this theme well.

If this is not a completely finished work, I would encourage you to expand upon this idea because the main issue that this track suffers from is its lack of dimension. The main melody, while great, seems to be a little too heavily relied upon, and the track sounds like it is struggling to flow from one section to the next without sounding forced.

The loud production also does not lend any favors to this problem. As a stylistic choice, I think it is fine for something like this, and I happen to like it. However, if a track is sounding a little too one-note, taking dynamics out of the picture can also put a spotlight on that issue.

My favorite part, however, was the reverse bass sound effect at the end. I had to play that back a couple of times because of how cool it was!

From one amateur to the next,

Lee