I would love to collaborate since I think we have the same sensibility about music, I love about this stuff it remains unpredictable even if it is composed by very essential elements, minimal I would say. The melodies are so sweet and they avoid being banal, in brief: they don't fear semplicity. Good job indeed you must have been working on it a lot, feel free to visit my channel so you can verify with your own ears our similarities of approach. Thanks.

congrats on first place
deserved

Mm, I dig this one a lot, the beginning is a bit strange for me but may be because I didn't have the time to digest the way the effects sit on the voice, would've been great to hear it a bit clearer to understand the lyrics, but it may be some aspect of folktronica that I'm not aware of, could also be me not being a native english speaker or maybe you're just saying random syllables! haha, this is just a little bit of a nitpick, as getting further into the song the effect on the lyrics becomes more part of the song and doesn't stand out as much as in the beginning.

I love what you did with this song, how you progressed it, how you're telling a story, the instruments used, the ambience, I don't have much criticism to give on it except the ending which felt a little, out of place maybe?, it wasn't a bad ending by any means, but it felt like the story being told was cut off.

Again, all of this is subjective and you still made a track I feel very good towards, and I'm going to listen to it a couple more times because I really liked it.

THIS IS INCREDIBLE

WOW!