00:45-1:00 i found myself piquing into the song
1:15~ a sour note i kinda noticed
2:27~ reintroduction of the drums here was in a satisfying place, not too obvious :)
2:36 that silent portion doesn't really work -- it's too brief and not defined enough; i literally just thought my phone had gone off or something! definitely consider the length of silence spaces! how much silence can quickly transfer one feeling to another.

OVERALL I liked this piece, I thought it was fun and moon-faced in a pleasant way, a midnight blue sky in my mind! I do feel like the tinny and repetitive aspects of the instrument soundsets you used draw things down a bit in the song as far as genuine replayability but the core is there! The feeling is there! I enjoyed my time with the song.