beautiful atmos

9/10

It kinda sounds like Skrillex new songs, i like that

good stuff

the sound design is really on point for the classic uk sound. the drums are well programmed but i think the kick is too harsh and needs more low-end punch than midrange click, and the shakers are too constant and up front. the vocals are also too forward and not used sparingly enough. would be good if this had a more classic structure with a more atmospheric buildup/drop & longer mid section breakdown.

I like the eerie texture at the beginning and the lo-fi details. The distorted vocals at :15 sound a bit disorienting with the way they duck in and out of the mix, and the texture of the piece is rather thin throughout. The rhythmic content is good, and the sound design that’s here is enjoyable - kinda reminds me of “Hydrate” by Skrillex. The spacey outro at 2:08 is also a nice touch. Overall, a more dynamic composition and some more coherent vocals would really help take this piece to the next level. The texture sounds a bit experimental for my tastes right now, although I really like the scratchy shaker you have rocking the top end of the frequency range. Evocative work here, Monumia. Keep at it! ^_^

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.25/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.75/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.25/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.5/1
Composite score
6.5/10