song's fine. it's cool
you seem to have composition and instrument choice down, so i won't go into too much detail and just say yea, the instruments fit and the composition good
i would rate it much higher, but there's one problem
what. is up. with the distortion
i can barely understand what's going on because it's so loud and distorted. not even rock music is this loud usually. you REALLY need to chill on the distortion slider, dawg