went a little Crazy there with the sound

some times simple can be better it was realy cool with that DnB shit half way in lol keep it up this is diffrent and i love it!

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Current Score
4.70 / 5.00 (+ 0.20)
vote 5 with vote power of 5.52

Was not expecting that beat to come into play

I digged that shit.

Your melody and structure use is quite nice.
Must say Id give you 10/10 If you used them right

But you kind of took this track in a weird path and its quite not in the path of ambient or anything its more experimental then anything.

I do like most of the melody you wrote though its actually good just needs some work to justice the track.

Things Id do
-progress the track more
-Sidechain the kick&bass
-Loose some low freq on the percs and bass maybe around 200
-More reverb on them open hats and snare
-Lower the bpm a bit

8/10
4/5

Hope that helped