I'm still not super good at FL, but I think it's way better than the other one, I tried to organize it better, add more variation and drums than before, I don't know if it can be considered as Drum n bass but I put it because I was based on drums of drum n bass but for being a beginner it obviously wasn't the best thing in the world :3
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