I listened to some of your original stuff as well and it sounds great, but I'm leaving a review here because I found you through this. I think it's safe to scout you, I'm keeping an eye for new bangers!
Such an awesome energetic vibe with the instrument choice here. Although, I do wish you experimented more with your own variations and twists beyond the small melody changes. Syncopated beat at 00:24 is kinda out of place imo. The melody being an octave lower at 02:06 is kinda underwhelming in comparison to the original, though I get you might've done this because of the guitar sounding weird on those high notes. Mixing could be improved, the background stuff does overshadow the melodies in some parts.
I don't have much else to say tbh, I'm not one of those review nerds, but I hope this load of baloney was helpful somehow.
Phantoskii 
OkuU-o 
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