The mix is really bright like I would expect EDM to be, and I love the style and composition you've done

The vocal performance and delivery is wonderful, but the work done to them is rough around the edges... I suggest you take a little more time to make them fit in the mix

The lyrical composition is a little strange, which I'm not going to dock from the score for, but I'll mention that there are some norms within the world of lyrics that I think could help if you were aware of. I only recently implemented that into my own music, so it sticks out to me

I'll elaborate if you happen to care, you can message me