I like the catchy mid-range synth riff at the beginning, although it sounds a bit dry and minimal. Some more reverb or other mixing effects might give it a bit more “pizzazz.” The piece is pretty slow to progress, and the percs at :29 could use a boost in the mix, as could the E-piano at :45. Some drum kits or pads or something would really help fill out the texture and add a sense of energy and drive. I like the sound design, but I also would’ve liked to see you create variety by changing up the harmonies at some point, not just switching out instruments playing the same couple of riffs. The cute mood, catchy harmonies, and solid sound design still get you a lot of credit here. I also think that, if you had sped up the pacing at the beginning of the piece, this would make a good loop. Keep at it, Jeffbeard! ^_^

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.25/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.75/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.5/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.5/1
Composite score
6.75/10