guitar from johnny808 on looperman
lyrics;
you're just not what i needed
(but in the end, you know, it's just like
i can't stop thinking about you
isn't that funny?)
you're just not what i needed
i was in love and you were conceited
i lie awake 'cause i hate when i dream
i would rather be dead than live while i know that you're breathing
you made me tired of sleeping
so i'm staying up
awake for once, don't think about it now
i did too much, think i'm spiraling down
i got marks on my arms and i feel nothing at all
you'd tell me it's harmful but once you are gone
from my memory
i'll try to be a better me
you're just not what i needed
i was in love and you were conceited
i lie awake 'cause i hate when i dream
i would rather be dead than live while i know that you're breathing
you made me tired of sleeping
so i'm staying up
Interesting! The guitar and the lyrics feel steeped in indie/emo of the 00s, but your vocal delivery (melody, tone, autotune) remind me more of modern pop/hip-hop songs.
Overall you've got a nice, pared down track that doesn't overstay its welcome. Nice job! :)
It's good, it's simple. Wish there was a little more too it, but that's also part of what works about it I guess.
Your layered vocals towards the end sound fantastic.
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