I like the mumbly vocals and the crisp drums. The guitars sound a bit overly contained in the mix, though, almost like you filtered out a lot of the mid-tones of it. Your voice is a nice rich baritone with soulful undertones. I also like the comedic aspect of the last 30 seconds, although it might’ve been even more effective if you had made the piece come full-circle with an additional refrain that integrated aspects of both the classic country and “sleepy punk” parts. Still, I thoroughly enjoyed the composition, sound design, melodies, and production here. Keep it up, Crammish! ^_^

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1.25/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
2/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.5/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
1/1
Composite score
9.25/10

WOW you and your brother did great!!

That's so cool! You guys did great and I mean that!