I like the fade-in at the beginning and the crisp beats at :05. The mix sounds a tad quiet, but otherwise clear and well-balanced. The sound design is a tad generic, but otherwise fits well with the ominous mood. The eerie upper-mid-range synth at :40 is nice, and I like the added rhythmic pattern at 1:02 too. Otherwise, though, the piece is very repetitive and has a bland and bottom-heavy composition. I think it would help if you had worked more to create variety within the phrases here. In other words, the texture regularly shifts every 16 bars or so, but within those 16 bars it feels rather stagnant. Layering some sweeps or drum fills on top could help keep this interesting, and more advanced methods like filtering and automations could smooth over some of the transitions as well. Overall, I like the apprehensive tone and production quality here, but the composition could use some more depth and variety. Keep at it, Mejeri! ^_^

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.5/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.5/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.5/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
.75/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.25/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.5/1
Composite score
5/10