The sound design, especially the creepy vocals in the background, is really great here - total dystopian vibe. The harmonies are rather dissonant here, though, and I also feel like the piece ends right as it is getting started. I understand that the dissonant harmonies are supposed to be part of the nightmare fuel, but I would challenge you to find ways of warming the listener up to this level of atonality. I also think it would help sell the drama of two sections with the beat here if you had fleshed out the structure a bit more. Maybe there’s an atmospheric bridge or slower-paced melodic section that would help make this piece feel more cohesive. Still, I really like the sound design, production quality, and atmosphere of this one. Really evocative work, KEZOR! ^_^

Mixing, mastering, and balance
2/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.5/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
1/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
1/1
Composite score
7.75/10