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ADR3-N

2023-08-09 17:04:11

I think the intro vinyl is a bit too loud relative to the chords coming in, as is the sweep! However, olskool feel is a vibe

The low mids on the piano at 1:04 could be tamed, and a bit more high end until 1:21 allowed for.

1:28 that transition noise is a bit sibilant and loud! Thoughout it is quite evident. I would advise to pick either one or the other -- loud and not sibilant, or quieter and still sibilant

I love your melodic lines.

Beyond those minor gripes, I don't have much for you. Great work!

icantpronouncethis responds:

Thank you for taking your time and listening and leaving suggestions.
Definitely gonna work on my mixing games.

octopus58

2023-06-06 12:45:30

Cozy, sounds both happy and hopeful at the same time. I like the moderate use of distortion on some instruments while keeping it off others to make a very interesting mix. The crackles are nice for amplifying the environment, and the reverb makes the song feel so spacious. Awesome work, keep it up!