im here

I like the blissful synth pattern at the beginning. The clap at :08 sounds a bit dry, and could use some more reverb. The vocals at :13 are pretty far back in the mix, but by :23 I’m really feel their passion. The bass is a little loud relative to the lead synth at the refrain, but otherwise I have no complaints with the production. The rhythmic content is great throughout, and the effects on the vocals - distortion, chopped up at transitory moments, etc. - are really cool. I especially like the overlapping rhythmic patterns and distortion at 1:25. Overall, this piece is a bit short - I would love to see you flesh out the structure more - but also really enjoyable. I looked up a translation of the lyrics, too, and they seem pretty heavy and raw. Keep it up, Wushyx! ^_^

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1.25/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
2/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.5/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
9/10

Прикольно, абсолютно прикольно. Микс звучит профессионально, буквально так, как много из моих любимых, ахах. Но мне интересно, откуда слышала эту мелодию в прошлом. Наверно забыла.

Спасибо за то, что пришел в NGADM

nice

this is amazing