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sleepwelltonight109 - Retro Beat

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started making over five months ago, spent two hours setting the framework and coming up with a tune, did pretty much everything from start to finish of the first drop. today in two hours I finished the rest, came up with a few more tunes.


I don't remember what I was inspired by, rather I just experimented and got good sounding music and I liked it


software: fl studio 9

render: fl studio 20


bass: 3xosc and another 3xosc (for offbeat)

lead: sytrus, sytrus, sytrus and another sytrus

piano: fl keys and sf player

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I like the energy at the beginning. The lead synth there sounds a tad harsh in the treble range of the frequency spectrum - perhaps some filtering could help fix that. The chord progression, sound design, and arrangement of this piece are all pretty generic, but it’s also pretty catchy and upbeat. I like the melodies at :37, although the drums could’ve come through a lot stronger in the mix here. The breakdown riff at 1:24 is also catchy, but once again the snare at 1:39 sounds really weak. The filtering and distortion on the piano at 1:50 are pretty cool, and the transition back into the main melodic phrase at 2:51 is well done. I might’ve liked to see you add more variety to the harmonic framework and/or main melody during the second half of the piece, though. Even a key change or brief post-chorus would help add a level of interest here that’s currently lacking. Overall, my biggest complaint is probably how cliche the piece is, but the mixing could also be a lot tighter. There’s a lot to like here between the rhythmic content, memorable melodies, smooth progression, and atmosphere, though. Keep at it, Panacea! ^_^

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
2/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.5/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.25/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
1/1
Composite score
7/10

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Uploaded
May 22, 2023
10:26 AM EDT
Genre
Dance
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5.1 MB
3 min 45 sec

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